Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Hello!

Hi Everyone,

Sorry, for not posting lately. I have had too much homework. This time I do not have a poem, But I do have a story.


"Tarantula's Visit To School”.

One stormy winter night when the climate was chilly, a tiger named Tarantula made a surprise visit to Fremont. There was thunder and lightning but that did not stop Tatantula from doing his secret mission. His secret mission was to find a plan. Not just any plan...the plan that will make him the King of the Jungle, instead of Linus the Lion. His secret source told him that a kid named Suchi had written a story about a tiger being the king of the jungle instead of a lion. Then the Tarantula's secret source said that she will recite her story to the class on Thursday. Then Tarantula had an idea. He will go to school on Thursday and listen to her story and he will use the plan of the tiger in the story and become the King. The slight problem in this plan? He had to survive an entire day in the city and overnight without being seen. He also had to be very silent. The day had come when Suchi would share her story. Tarantula made big strides on his way to school site. The problem had arisen when he had to go through the courtyard doors. Luckily there were children outside doing P.E. and a child wanted to go to the bathroom, so the teacher gave her the keys. The girl opened the door and left it open. Tarantula was real slick about it but managed to go through the courtyard doors when children weren't watching. Now there was another problem. Tarantula did not know which room number to go to. Is it 405, 504, 406, 407, 506, or203? Tarantula thought about it for a while and thought why not lean against each door and listen? He made a lucky guess and tried room 506.Just when he leaned he heard someone say..."Suchi, you're up!” He was so excited he leaned on more, but the door wasn't Latched properly so BOOM! The door opened and Tarantula fell on his face. Everyone went to look at the tiger. Poor thing! That bump made him fall unconcious. Nobody could describe their feeling. Some were scared and others were ready to run. Other people were amazed. Well they were amazed to see the design and style of Tarantula's pattern. Oops! I forgot to tell you that Tarantula was a Bengal Tiger that was white. Then the teacher of Rm506 called the office who called the Animal Control. The Animal Control took Tarantula to the Oakland Zoo. After school was over I bicycled to my house thinking that you could not deny what a thrilling experience this was! Then when I watching the news the next day, our experience was the highlight! All the news channels were talking about the tiger in our classroom. What happened to Tarantula? He is now held captive in a zoo and thinks to himself "I was so close to being called Your Highness, by all the animals in the jungle!"


THE END


Liked it or loved it? Also if you are commenting...can you tell me if the design I changed the background to? I like it!

Love,
Suchi

P.S. This story was a school assignment!!

6 comments:

nara said...

Awesome story. really liked the plot. You are working hard towards becoming a writer/poet. keep them coming.

si said...

Keep writing! Nice plot.

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Pushpa said...

dear suchi, nice story - i had read it earlier and now i re-read it - looking forward to more like this, perhaps during winter break..

Unknown said...

hi suchi,
i have heard this story in school.....it is very nice and i don't mind reading it again.....

-Prerna:)

Tara Niyogi said...

Look Suchi....you have a great blog and all, but even though you know a lot of stuff and whatever, and you're the editor of the newsletter, you tend to brag a little too much, and I really don't like it. A lot of people don't like it, in fact. So keep your over-acheivement to yourself and your braced teeth, okay?